Report on office working conditions (GB)

The company has recently ordered a survey on office working conditions. The following report outlines the main issues picked out in the survey. It aims at reflecting as objectively as possible employees’ feelings and exposing recommendations in order to improve everyone’s working condition.

Office furniture
People are globally satisfied by the office furniture. However, some employees has suggested to extend the relaxation space and to make it more comfortable by adding furniture such as sofas. They expressed their wish to have a place where informal conversations could take place. Moreover, this would allow people to meet in a less stressful environment and thus enhance their creativity.

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Temperature regulation
An important number of people noticed that the temperature regulation system could be generaly improved. Indeed, employees complain about too hot temperatures in the winter and, on the contrary, too cold air conditionning in the summer. As a result, they would be grateful if the company would make an effort to enhance the quality of the temperature regulation system and thus contribute to better working conditions and protecting the environment.

Lighting
Some people within the department suffer from eye strain. We assume that the lighting could be responsible for this embarrassment. It is suggested to the company to mandate an expert to investigate whethter the eye strain in due to the lighting system or not.

In conlusion, I recommend the company studay the feasability of the above suggestions. The whole department and I are convinced that this could help to improve the staff’s stafisfaction and productivity.

Very clear and well written overall. The necessary points are covered and appropriated detail given. However, note many spelling errors.