The company has recently ordered a survey on office working conditions. The following report outlines the main issues discussed in the survey. Its aim is to represent as objectively as possible employees’ feelings and to encourage recommendations in order to improve everyone’s working condition.
Office furniture
People are generally satisfied with their office furniture. However, some employees have suggested extending the relaxation space and making it more comfortable by adding furniture such as sofas. They have expressed their wish to have a place where informal conversations could take place. Moreover, this would allow people to meet in a less stressful environment and thus enhance their creativity.
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Temperature regulation
A significant number of people have noticed that the temperature regulation system could be improved overall. Indeed, employees have complained about the heater in the winter and, similarly, the AIR conditioner in the summer. As a result, they would be grateful if the company would make an effort to enhance the quality of the temperature regulation system which would ultimately contribute to better working conditions in addition to protecting the environment.
Lighting
Some people within the department suffer from eye strain. We assume that the lighting could be responsible for this predicament. It has been suggested to the company to hire an expert to investigate whether the eye strain is due to the lighting system or not.
In conclusion, I recommend the company study the feasibility of the above suggestions. The whole department and I are convinced that this could help to improve the staff’s satisfaction and productivity.
Very clear and well written overall. The necessary points are covered and appropriated detail given. However, note many spelling errors.
