To whom it may concern
I hereby nominate Chiune Sugihara, who was
the Japanese diplomat in Lithuania during World War II. He saved more than 6,000 Jews by
serving visas, so that they could
escaped from the country to either Japan or other countries via Japan. I truly believe
him a real hero because of the following two reasons.
Firstly, he is considered to be a hero because of his
self-sacrifice attitude. What he did was against Japanese diplomatic policy at that time, and so there was
a possibility that he
could have been
assassinated or accused of disloyalty. However, he believed that his decision was right and kept
serving visas
for Jews
while it was
not what the Japanese government
and also the Germany government
expected him to do. Even though he was lucky not to have been killed
for the political reason, in fact, the Japanese government
fired him after he
repatriated to Japan. Given these
______, I believe that he deserves to receive
a prize of “Heroes like you and me.”
Secondly, his humanitarian activity was
obviously significant because
it was more than 6,000 people whose lives
he actually saved. He made his own decision
_ regardless nationality, which is an ultimate and perfect model of humanitarianism. It should have been a difficult decision for him to
serve visas to Jews as a Japanese diplomat at that time. Nevertheless, he never forgot that he was a human before
the Japanese and a diplomat, and worked for humanity. Without his decision, more than 6,000 people
were killed. Hence, his humanitarianism should receive more attention in
the world history and I believe that the prize will give him an opportunity to get attention as a very important historic person.
Chiune Sugihara is not a famous person in
the world history, but what he achieved deserves to be appraised more on the global stage, which could be the one of the best examples of self-sacrifice and humanitarianism. Hence, I strongly recommend him as a nominee of the prize of the competition, “Heroes like you and d me.”
Very nicely written overall Nami. There are a number of grammar conventions that need a bit of attention which I've highlighted in yellow. However, your writing is persuasive and you tell a very good story which enhances the strength of the paper. Good Job!//Collection//To whom it may concern
I hereby nominate Chiune Sugihara, who was
a Japanese diplomat in Lithuania during World War II. He saved more than 6,000 Jews by
issuing visas, so that they
could escape from the country to either Japan or other countries via Japan. I truly believe
that he is a real hero
for the following two reasons.
Firstly, he is considered to be a hero because of his
self-sacrificing attitude. What he did was against Japanese diplomatic policy at that time, and so there was
a possibility that he would have been excuted or accused of disloyalty. However, he believed that his decision was right and kept
issuing visas to Jews, even though it was against what the Japanese government as well as the Germany government expected him to do. Even though he was lucky not to have been killed
for political reasons, in fact, the Japanese government
dismissed him after he
went back to Japan. Given these
reasons, I believe that he deserves to receive
the prize of “Heroes like you and me.”
Secondly,
his humanitarian activity was significant because more than 6,000 people's lives were saved. He made his own
decisions regardless of nationality, which is an ultimate and perfect model of humanitarianism. It
must have been a difficult decision for him to
issue visas to Jews as a Japanese diplomat at that time. Nevertheless, he never forgot that he was a human before
being Japanese and a diplomat, and worked for humanity.
Without his decision, more than 6,000 people would have been killed. Hence, his humanitarianism should receive more attention
in world history and I believe that the prize will give
him an opportunity to
be recognized as a very important historic person.
Chiune Sugihara is not a famous person
in world history, but what he achieved deserves to be appraised more on the global stage, which could be the one of the best examples of self-sacrifice and humanitarianism. Hence, I strongly recommend him as a nominee
for the prize of the competition, “Heroes like you and d me.”
